Entry 14 - Feedback

This lesson we watched the other people's film and got an overall feedback of our film.

The tables are in the order of, Emma and Alisa, Pypah and Mignon, Stephanie and Lilly Woods, Lily Baker, Georgia and Abbey, and Nadine and Dayna respectively. All the films were great. I'm so nervous about ours. 

The feedback that we received from the class were; After the heartbeat, put a scene where she gets pushed into the water and starts drowning. Make her wake her with a map and a key in her hand. Use a tripod and make Sarah stay still. The flashbacks does not really make sense. Think about time limit. Slowly have a faster pace editing.