Entry 21 - Feedback

Things to fix: 

• Jump cuts on the reading through the newspaper. 
• Too dark lighting on the reading (They have the same name) 
• Don’t really need to show every opening of paper 
• First paper roll slow 
• Second paper roll faster 
• One shot look down and then next shot hands going down to box 
• Make the investigating scene lighter at the start
• Too dark at the start of turning on the light 
• I should be in focus when the light turns on 
• Balance in lighting for scenes. Lighting should be consistent. 
• Half way opening the folder and then just open it 
• Lighter shot for the place where she say you should hurry up 
• The person talking should be focused 
• If camera isn’t focused, make the lighting lighter 
• No Zoom
• Make it focused 

• Maybe have flashbacks/story with his voiceover

• Editing needs to be tighter 
• Plot hole of who killed the person 

Things that’s chill:

• Props 
• Alisa dead shot is cool 

Shoot: 

Hallway Scene 

Get rid of zooming scenes 

Reshoot the flashback scene so that it’s actually a graphic match 

Reshoot interrogation 

Taking out marriage certificate from box 

We're going to meet over the weekend to refilm the things. We might not even have to refilm it all because we might just not use these shots.