Entry 4 - Development
Dayna and I further developed our ideas without Sarah, as she wasn't here today. With the ideas that we had in mind last time, we tried to tie up our story so that it actually made sense.
We thought of this really cool idea where the Big Bad Wolf is actually red's imaginary friend, and he doesn't exist, but he whispers the sweet devils lies into her ear, telling her to kill Grandma. Then the policeman can be the Huntsman, who's trying to help her by solving the case. Grandma is still going to be the victim.
It'll be really cool if at the last scene when the police goes out of investigation room, she looks to the left and says, "There's no way I'm wrong right?" to open air and the wolf is not there in a long shot. But there's a mid shot of the wolf where he goes, "Of course my dear." THAT'D BE SUCH A HUGE PLOT TWIST.
If we do this, the stories will all fall into place while correlating with the ideas of the original Red Riding Hood.
Here's our rough narrative convention with our previous ideas on it as well:
We thought of this really cool idea where the Big Bad Wolf is actually red's imaginary friend, and he doesn't exist, but he whispers the sweet devils lies into her ear, telling her to kill Grandma. Then the policeman can be the Huntsman, who's trying to help her by solving the case. Grandma is still going to be the victim.
It'll be really cool if at the last scene when the police goes out of investigation room, she looks to the left and says, "There's no way I'm wrong right?" to open air and the wolf is not there in a long shot. But there's a mid shot of the wolf where he goes, "Of course my dear." THAT'D BE SUCH A HUGE PLOT TWIST.
If we do this, the stories will all fall into place while correlating with the ideas of the original Red Riding Hood.
Here's our rough narrative convention with our previous ideas on it as well:
Mr Andrews also recommended us to make a mind map, because it allows us to see everything at once.
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